i heard all of them go out from that big room and after i lost my feelings...few minutes later i feel something touching my foots and i wake up ...i tried to check into the darkness i was but impossible ..maybe had rat i that dirty place i thinked ...and i tried to rest little bit more ..my pain was so terrible ...and my chest was broken and was so difficulty to breath ..few seconds later again something touch my leg ...i tried to move little and to find that think down me...when i strech in maximum i reach to touch it ...something big ..bigger than what I think..was not a rat at all ..I whisper slowly ..hey anybody here? ..the think touch me again and I heard ITS ME BRO very low voice ..my heart almost jump from her place ..Kime was alive and with me God ITS TRUE?? WHERE ARE YOU BROTHER CAN YOU MOVE ??COME NEAR TO ME PLEASE I said .. I HAVE BROKEN LEG ..WAIT IM TRYING TO REACH THERE ...IM COMING his low voice make me cry and happy ..he was there for me..he pull me left foot and I try also to pull bit him till he reach and I can see him .. he was really tortured and crolling like a snail.. Kime reach to sit beside me chair and put his head in my knee... LET ME RELAX A BIT he whisper I touch his face slowly and I observe his eyes was blooted and his upper lips bleeding.. WHAT HAPPENED BRO ...ARE YOU FINE ..HOW YOU CAN COME LIKE THIS ALONE ..WHERE YOU LEFT US ...I SAID AND I STARTED TO HUG HIS HEAD ... he didn't answer at all I only heard his low breath in my hand ...he stay like this maybe twenty minutes...after he wake up .. WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE STUPID MAN ..WHY YOU ARE ALONE..YOU KNOW WHAT THIS PEOPLE ARE ..he whisper .. NO WORRIES MAN ..OUR GUYS ARE NEAR VERY NEAR ...BUT WE NEED TO MAKE ME FREE ..WE NEED TO SEND YOU OUT FIRST .. I answer .. YOU ARE IN CHAIN BRO ..NO KEYS AND THE STUPID THING ..THIS PLACE ITS A FORTIFIED CASTLE ..NO CHANCE TO GET OUT IN OUR CONDITION ALSO ...WE DONT HAVE GUNS AND WE ARE TOTALLY DESTROYED... I know I told him ...we will have difficulty with getting out but let think of it...no guns and I'm stuck ... while I was dizzy like in four worlds...I remember the grenade I took inside my boxer ... BRO I HAVE SOMETHING IN MY BOXER INSIDE ..CAN YOU STRECH MORE PLEASE ..CAN YOU GET IT OUT.. JUST CAREFUL ITS A MILITARY GRENADE ... kime move slowly and grab my arm with one hand and the other one in the metallic chair...he tried to pull more him self to get more near ..after he put his right hand and remove out the grenade .. AND THEN AFTER I TOUCH YOUR TINY WORM ..WHAT ITS THE PLANS WITH THIS NOW BRO?WE WILL MAKE SUICIDE HERE..Kime said I tried to smile NOW YOU GIVE IT TO MY LEFT HAND SLOWLY AND TRY TO GET OUT THE PIN ..I said to him ARE YOU CRAZY BRO ?? REMOVE THE PIN AND THIS THING WILL BLOW OUR BODIES IN FEW SECONDS he shout ITS NOT YET NY TIME TO DIE BRO..TRY TO GET ME FREE PLEASE ..I WILL HANDLE IT JUST PUT IN MY LEFT HAND AND REMOVE THE PIN ...it's simple I said .. Kime make straight with his teeth the bended side of the pin to make easy for removal and after he slowly put in my left hand ...my left hand was the strongest from my hands in that condition I was...after I become sure was in good position to hold I said to Kime REMOVE SLOWLY THE PIN BUT DONT THROW IT ..WE NEED THE PIN ...SLOWLY SLOWLY HA ?? ARE YOU SURE IT WILL WORK BRO ..CAN YOU REALLY HANDLE THE GRENADE OR NOT ...Kime whisper JUST DO IT PLEASE ..THE TIME ITS GOING FAST MAYBE THEY WILL BE BACK AFTER WE ARE REALLY DEAD O SHOUT TO KIME after three tentative he reach to remove the pin ..my forehead start to sweat from the tension.. YES BRO WE MAKE IT ...CAN YOU HOLD NOW THE GRENADE ...he smiled while handling the pin in his hand .... I CAN HOLD IT ..NOW TRY TO REMOVE THE CHAIN AT THE BACK ...DOWN MY ASS PLEASE ..I answer .. JUST FAST FAST HA ? kime tried to bend the pin with his teeth to make it longer and straight and jump at my back ...after one minute I heard the lock down cracking.. ITS OPEN BRO ...WE MAKE IT ...he's voice start to recuper.. OKAY NOW TRY TO REMOVE THE CHAIN IN MY LEGS ITS NEAR FOR YOU Kime was so excited and after two trial he accidentally throw the pin in the floor... SHIT ...I LOST I LOST IT MY HAND ITS SHAKING...SORRY BRO ..I heard my left hand start to shake a bit ...but I didn't react bad to Kim...I just grabbed more tight the grenade and with relax voice I said PLEASE RELAX EVERYTHING ITS OKAY NO WORRY PLEASE RELAX ...THE PIN ITS JUST THERE UNDER YOUR LEG ...RELAX AND TRY TO FIND IT ..EVERYTHING ITS UNDER OUR CONTROL..WE CAN MAKE IT BRO WE ARE TOGETHER he start to search the flooring and he found not so far from the chair..he clean with his shirt bcs was wet and he put in his mouth again WHAT ARE YOU DOING BRO ...LETS GO TO OTHER PADLOCK PLEASE ... A SECOND PLEASE ..HE SMILED ...Kime make a small circle with his teeth and put a small cloth in the pin for not losing again ... NOW OUR MAGIC KEY WILL NOT JUMP HE SAID ... I smiled and I give him courage to go ahead with the second chain...my legs finally was free and I tried to stretch it a bit ... after 2minutes relax ..we continue to the final stages my hands padlocks.. LETS GO BRO ..MAKE FREE FIRST MY RIGHT I said ...the hand holding the grenade become weak again and start to shake like in electricity ... MOVE FAST BRO ITS WEAK NOW I whisper... needed only 20 seconds and we was in the final point..my left hand... LET PUT FEW SECONDS THE PIN INSIDE BRO ..ITS BEEN MORE THAN A HOUR ..YOUR HAND ITS TIRED NOW ..kime said and put the pin inside and took slowly from my hand ..I finally feel free and I tried to stand up for relaxing also ...I reach to hug him and I said WE WILL BE FREE SOON ...NO WORRIES I WILL NEVER LOST AGAIN ANOTHER BROTHER I said ... YOU ARE CRAZY MAN ..YOU ARE CRAZY kime whisper into tears... I didn't wait longer..I grab again the grenade I put in my left and I said let continue bro ..they are almost here again... we reach to remove the last padlock and I was free ...free from those chain and tired like a he'll from my hands...
Download Novelah App
You can read more chapters. You'll find other great stories on Novelah.
Book Comment (1180)
Sophia Cabbab
Wow, that story was truly captivating! I couldn't stop reading until the very end. The way you described the characters and the setting was so vivid, it felt like I was right there with them. The plot twists were unexpected and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for sharing this incredible story!
13/08/2023
2
GirayJesus
keep writing more...this story make me so curious about everything look so real more more more
16/01/2022
1
RosdiIrfan
the story so sad and not bad to read them also I enjoy the story
Wow, that story was truly captivating! I couldn't stop reading until the very end. The way you described the characters and the setting was so vivid, it felt like I was right there with them. The plot twists were unexpected and kept me on the edge of my seat. Thank you for sharing this incredible story!
13/08/2023
2keep writing more...this story make me so curious about everything look so real more more more
16/01/2022
1the story so sad and not bad to read them also I enjoy the story
16/01/2022
4View All