Gunshots were fired in the sky, it was a happy moment for the female commandos. They just completed a dangerous mission, the dancing and singing was one part of the moment. This moment was in the deepest forest of the region, the commandos were divided into groups of five. They conducted different kinds of missions around the country. Commander Hannah and her group of five were ranked the best, she had the best commando strong and determined Unna Roy. Unna was admired by every commando, they all wanted her position, among the commandos craving for her rights was saffari. She envied Unna her entire life, the night went down rapidly like a burning push driven by the cold wind. The party was a starter for the following day's big announcement, each group was choosing a new commander from the five. Unna was nowhere near the party; she went for a deep ice bath at the stream, unna never spoke that much. She was vicious, she valued her alone time, despite having it all she wouldn't dare disrespect all got bossy. She had a good relationship with commander Hannah, she raised to the surface of the stream. Unna was surprised to find aracely waiting for her, aracily was the only friend unna had ever had. It was a bond of a lifetime, unna saw the excitement in her eyes. It was written all over her adorable face. Unna stared at her as she was coming out of the water. It was dark and cold, " what's up with you, is it raining coins " she laughed, aracely walking up to her, she came with a blanket and covered her up. " At least be gentle to your body". Unna dressed up, aracely reminded unna about the special announcement " I'm confident you will be our next commander " hugged her. It was everyone's dream to lead, it was very important to Unna fulfilling her mom's dream was all what kept her going. No one had a doubt it was definitely going to be her, " aracely I have waited all my life, let's grab some food ". Back at the camp saffari was all about the place, she felt irritated. She hadn't done enough to grab unna that special moment, she for one knew it's going to be unna. Every commander at the camp wanted unna on their team, surumi was sitting around the fire. She minded her own business and never missed a detail. Commander Hannah and a few other commanders which includes commader Tara , commader Rosario and commader mons , sat out on a private section of the camp where they settled Their tents, they all Enjoying a good drink, they all knew who would be picked from their team. Hannah was happy with unna, Unna didn't even require a team, she was all one team alone. With such determination she would make an impressive general one day, Hannah like the rest were old it was time to hand over. " I will be honored to announce unna as my succer tomorrow " she was proud and satisfied, a dark figure was eavesdropping on the conversation and heard all the commanders talk about the new succers. Unna walked up to her tent, she found Hannah waiting for her. Unna was surprised and stopped to salute, Hannah was extremely emotional. She saw unnas future. It was bright, the same brightness irritated other commandos. " Unna, i have never been proud of a soldier till this moment " unna was still not moving but her excitement was not hidden, Hannah hugged her " you will make a great general one day " Hannah did her part and saved her country right, the precious time to surrender her gun was in a few hours. Unna was less emotional but she couldn't hold back and hugged Hannah " thank you for believing in me " tearing running down her face. Hannah knew unna hadn't eaten, " wash up and come we are having a meeting " hannah saluted at unna " my commander ". Hannah and her team sat around the fire, she was pleased with them all. They all put in effort, she praised unna as the team captain. Saffari rolled her eyes up, not surprised but pissed and jealous, " unna it's time for you next step, get some rest " the all saluted as she walked away, saffari turned to Unna she knew unna was chosen already she stepped out in a rush frustrated Mae followed her, surumi just got and walked to her tent without saying a single word . Aracely was happy. Morning came the noise surrounding the camp, it was all speaking excitement. Everyone was going home to see their families. Unna was nervous she was shaking, aracely was right by her side. Only a few hours were awaiting the ceremony. Unna was facing the mountain, she stared at it from a distance and saw her mother. She was deep in the thinking zone, a soft voice was heard from behind, " captain unna commander Hannah requests your presence " unna turned surprised, the lady was saluting. She wondered why Hannah wanted to see her, the request appeared to be an emergency. " Alright " the lady walked away, unna was in a rush she quickly headed to the private area to see Hannah. Upon arrival at her tent, she called out for her at the entrance. She didn't hear anything, all she could hear was the wind and the noise coming from the camp. It was suspicious, unna thought of heading back. She thought it could be an emergency, so she scanned around and entered. She felt a cold chill, unna was sensitive, she felt it had a negative impact, something was strange, she called out for Hannah , her tent was massive. Unna turned to the larger section, and saw Hannah standing, unna was shocked she felt weak in the knees. Hannah was standing a few feet from her blood dripping her stomach stabbed with the knife still in her, Hannah could speak she was leaning on a table. Unna ran to her and removed the knife, Hannah fell on the ground, " unna ran " Hannah used her last strength to warn unna to run, as unna was in shock crying , with a bloody knife in her hands. General Whitlock and a few commandos raided the tent, they busted open and found unna still holding the bloody knife, unna was crying " help her " she faced Hannah again she was gone. " arrest her !!! " General Whitlock shouted pointing at unna. * * *
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very nice and sweet
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