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Chapter 5 Pressure Rising

They didn’t speak on the way back up.
The tunnel’s crawlspace felt tighter than before, the stone colder against their backs and knees. Every sound—the scrape of a boot, the wheeze of a breath, the thump of a knee on tile—echoed louder now, like the passage was remembering them.
When Layla finally pushed open the rusted service hatch and let the daylight spill in, neither of them rushed through it.
Ren blinked into the afternoon light, eyes squinting hard. His ears rang.
The surface felt wrong.
Too bright. Too fast. Like the world had moved on while they were down there, and now they were watching it happen from behind glass.
The street was alive with the mundane: mopeds whining around corners, elderly neighbors gossiping from balconies, children running along cobbled sidewalks with ice cream in hand. A dog barked from somewhere across the street.
Ren stepped out slowly, shoulders hunched, the duffel bag slung low on his back like a weight he hadn’t earned.
Layla climbed out behind him, locking the door with more force than necessary. She said nothing, just stuffed the key in her jacket and walked three paces ahead.
The sun was warm, but Ren was cold. His coat felt heavier now. He looked at the sidewalk—at the little metal storm drain grilles spaced every few meters.
Each one had a spiral of dried leaves caught around the rim.
He paused.
That’s not strange, he told himself.
Wind. Debris. Coincidence.
But still—spirals.
The leaves curved around the grates like they'd been placed deliberately. He crouched beside one and touched the iron slits. It wasn’t hot from the sun. It was slightly warm from beneath.
He leaned closer.
The faintest whisper of air kissed his cheek—inward.
The street drain was breathing.
He jerked back.
Layla had turned the corner already, not noticing he’d fallen behind.
Ren caught up fast, grabbing her elbow.
She flinched hard.
“Don’t—!” she snapped, then saw it was him. Her voice lowered. “Don’t sneak up on me.”
He hesitated.
“You feel it?” he asked.
Layla didn’t answer at first.
Then: “Yes.”
They walked in silence the rest of the way, down three blocks and around the southern edge of the plaza where tourists gathered near fountains and vendors set up under striped canopies.
Layla kept checking her phone.
Not messages. Not calls.
She was checking data.
Her face tightened with each refresh.
They reached the edge of her studio building. Layla stopped at the steps, staring blankly at the front door, like she wasn’t sure whether she wanted to go inside.
Ren waited beside her, watching the people walk by. The city moved like nothing was wrong.
But he could feel it now.
The vibration.
Subtle. Low. Just beneath the soles of his shoes. A kind of pressure building quietly underneath the stone.
He looked up at the streetlamp beside them. A faint metallic buzz ran down its frame.
It wasn’t from the bulb.
It was from the ground.
Layla finally broke the silence.
“I think… it’s starting.”
Ren looked at her.
She didn’t look scared.
She looked resigned.
He nodded.
“Same as Shiohama.”
She turned to face him.
“We need to know how fast it’s spreading.”
And for the first time, she didn’t sound like a skeptic.
She sounded like someone trying to get ahead of a wave.
Layla’s studio felt smaller than it had the night before.
Same cracked tiles. Same cluttered shelves. Same mugs and map rolls and stacks of old binders. But the air inside now felt... stale. Heavy. Like whatever had been breathing below had exhaled upward and found its way into this room.
Ren sat on the sleeping mat in the corner, quietly drying the mud from the edge of his boots with a torn cloth. He wasn’t shaking. Not exactly. But he moved like someone who had to choose not to.
Layla didn’t speak.
She was too focused.
Her laptop whirred on the folding desk, an old external drive humming beside it. A small command line window flickered open, running an archive fetch program that her father had left behind. She hadn’t used it in over a year.
She typed a string of credentials.
Admin override.
It asked for a clearance level.
She typed:
arsene_LV4_backup
Password:
EXFIL1932
Click.
Access granted.
She opened the live pressure network.
A schematic of Marseille appeared—a gridded map overlaying the city’s districts, peppered with green dots. Each one represented a pressure valve in the subterranean flood-control system. Most of the dots blinked regularly—green, steady.
Then one blinked yellow.
Then two more.
Then three.
In less than a minute, twelve valves turned yellow.
One turned red.
“No rain,” Layla said quietly. “No storms. These valves are supposed to stay open, dry, neutral in this weather. But…”
She clicked a node in District 7. A line graph opened beside it.
The pressure curve was rising in a slow but steady arc.
“Same as last night,” she muttered. “Nothing. Then a slow incline. No rainfall, no runoff, no pump delay.”
She opened two more graphs. Same arc. Same pressure pattern.
Ren stood, crossed the room.
“Compare,” he said.
She looked up. “To what?”
He pulled the folded map from his bag—his grandfather’s.
Laid it flat.
And pointed.
“Here.”
Layla leaned in.
The Japanese notes in the margin meant little to her, but the curves drawn beside them did not. They were graphs. Hand-plotted.
Pressure over time.
Identical arc.
Her eyes jumped between the map and the screen. Back and forth. Curve for curve. Fluctuation for fluctuation.
“This was drawn by hand,” she whispered. “Years ago. Before any of this.”
Ren nodded once.
“Shiohama,” he said. “It started like this.”
She looked up at him.
“You’re absolutely sure?”
“Yes.”
Layla leaned back slowly in her chair.
Then opened a new tab.
She typed in a public-facing data feed for Marseille’s meteorological office.
Clear skies.
No rainfall for three days.
No groundwater fluctuation.
And yet... the pressure was rising beneath the city.
Layla exhaled. Her hand tightened around her mouse.
“You were right.”
Ren didn’t say anything.
Layla clicked one more tab. A dashboard she hadn’t touched in months. It pulled from seismic data, underground motion sensors, and atmospheric micro-vents installed after the 2011 street collapses in Lyon.
A blinking yellow dot appeared near the harbor.
One reading from thirty seconds ago:
Airflow reversal detected.
She clicked it.
A number flashed:
-0.6 atm.
Negative pressure.
The tunnels weren’t venting air.
They were pulling it in.
Layla paced while the phone rang.
Her fingers drummed against her thigh, faster than her footsteps. She stared at the blinking valve map on her laptop screen, as if she could force the red dots to change by willpower alone.
Ren sat in silence, perched on the edge of a plastic storage crate. He watched her carefully, as if trying to gauge whether she was going to explode or vanish.
The line picked up.
“Allô?”
“Aunt Nadia, it’s me.”
“Layla?” The voice was sharp, not cold—but wary. “Why are you calling me on my personal number during working hours?”
“I found something,” Layla said quickly. “The pressure data from the VDN grid. It’s—”
“Layla.” Nadia sighed. “Not again.”
“It’s real. I’m looking at the live feed. Valves in D2 through D6 are showing simultaneous upward pressure. That’s not weather. That’s not coincidence.”
There was a pause. A quiet click of keys. Layla imagined her aunt sitting at her overly tidy desk in the urban planning office, half-listening while sipping from her tea mug labeled ‘Bureaucrat Queen.’
“Those readings are outdated,” Nadia said calmly. “That system still pulls from legacy sensors. They glitch when the underground temp swings.”
“I checked temp logs,” Layla snapped. “They’re stable. This isn’t a sensor failure. The airflow reversed near the harbor, and I have seismic bleed from a tunnel collapse under Rue Fournier.”
Silence again.
Ren stood now, moving beside her.
Layla turned the phone to speaker.
“This is Ren,” she said. “He—”
“Who?”
“Ren. He’s the one who—”
“I hope this isn’t another weird activist thing, Layla.”
Ren tried anyway. “I come from Japan. My city—Shiohama—flooded. Same signs. Same pattern. The system underground is—”
“I’m sorry,” Nadia cut in. “Is he a licensed professional?”
Layla flinched. “He’s not. But—”
“Then I can’t take input from a civilian who’s barely speaking the language and telling me the drains are haunted.”
Ren’s face didn’t change. But his hands tightened at his sides.
Nadia sighed into the receiver.
“You’ve always had a tendency to dig into ghosts, Layla. I thought after your father—”
“Don’t,” Layla said sharply.
“I suggest you get some rest,” Nadia continued, her tone softening only slightly. “These systems are old. They misbehave. But there is no emergency.”
Click.
The call dropped.
Layla didn’t move.
Ren spoke first.
“She won’t listen.”
“No,” Layla said. “She never does.”
She turned back to the desk, rage bottled tightly under her skin. “She thinks I’m still chasing shadows.”
Ren looked down at the map. Four more red lights had appeared since the call started.
He pointed.
“D6 just jumped again.”
Layla sank into her chair. The screen glared back at her like an accusation.
Then—
A new alert.
Not a blinking dot.
A video.
Public domain.
From social media.
She clicked it.
A shaky phone camera showed Place Jules Guesde, a public plaza not far from the port.
In the center of the square, a manhole cover was rattling. Shuddering.
Then—
Boom.
Water exploded from below.
Not in a geyser.
In a spiral.
Clean. Deliberate. Carving through cars like they were paper.
People screamed. A child slipped. Someone ran past holding a dog. The water surged, then sucked downward, pulling debris with it like a drain had opened in the street itself.
Ren leaned forward, transfixed.
“That’s it,” he whispered. “That’s how it started.”
Layla watched the spiral pattern fade into the flow of muddy water.
And for the first time—
She believed it was spelling something.
The streets were too quiet by the time they arrived.
Ren stood beside Layla at the edge of a makeshift barricade: red-and-white striped tape strung hastily between lampposts and plastic construction horses, forming a wide cordon around Place Jules Guesde.
City workers in orange vests moved like bees—hosing down the street, rolling aside broken bikes, speaking into radios clipped to their shoulders. A crushed car still smoldered near the plaza’s center, the windshield imploded from beneath. A dozen tourists were being herded off the scene by municipal officers in navy windbreakers.
But the most obvious thing was what was missing:
The water.
The plaza was dry now. Bone dry.
Too dry.
As if it had never happened.
Layla and Ren stood behind the cordon. She held her phone in her hand, replaying the video again and again. Same angle. Same timing.
“Someone cleaned this up fast,” she muttered.
Ren pointed at the manhole cover.
It had been replaced.
New. Welded. Sealed shut. Still faintly steaming.
“Burn marks,” he said. “Same as Shiohama. They capped it.”
Layla stepped closer to the tape. A security officer moved toward her with a frown, but she ignored him, crouching to examine the seam around the metal plate.
“No label,” she muttered. “No identifier. Not even a utility code.”
The manhole cover was blank.
That was illegal.
Ren watched the plaza like it might breathe again. He moved carefully, his attention not on the manhole, but the drainage slope built into the street.
Most roads curved ever so slightly downward toward the grates—but here, the entire plaza gently dipped in a spiral around the manhole, as if it had been carved by water itself.
“This wasn’t a pipe burst,” he said.
Layla stood. “No.”
A man in a high-vis jacket approached them from the side, holding a clipboard and a stern look.
“You can’t be here,” he said in French. “This is an active maintenance zone.”
Layla switched languages. “I’m student press. Arséne. I submitted a request to cover the water main disruptions—”
“There are no disruptions,” the man cut in. “It was an isolated pressure release from a failed cap. Nothing to report. Move along.”
Layla narrowed her eyes. “People were injured. A car was flipped.”
The man didn’t flinch.
“It was an old pipe. System failure. We’re replacing the infrastructure. That’s all.”
Ren stepped beside her, pointing at the phone.
“Video,” he said. “Show him.”
Layla hesitated.
Then held it out.
The man glanced down, barely.
“I’ve seen it,” he said flatly. “That video has already been flagged. Do yourself a favor. Don’t circulate it further.”
He turned and walked away.
Ren and Layla stared after him.
“That was a warning,” Ren said.
Layla exhaled through her nose.
“Yeah. I caught that.”
They turned away and walked back toward the street.
The wind had picked up slightly, carrying a faint wet smell. Like copper. Or something pulled from too far below.
As they turned the corner, Ren looked back.
One last time.
There—just for a second—he saw a flicker of movement across the street drain at the edge of the plaza.
A pattern in the grime.
A curling line.
A spiral.
They didn’t go back to the studio.
Instead, Layla took Ren to the roof of the neighboring building, a flat concrete pad cluttered with broken satellite dishes and a single folding chair covered in bird droppings. She paced while Ren sat cross-legged on the ledge, the sea visible in the distance—gray and flat and waiting.
Layla’s hands moved fast over her phone. She was bouncing between social feeds, pressure graphs, the video footage—editing, stitching clips, muting background sound. She paused only to zoom in on the manhole in the middle of the plaza, scrubbing frame by frame through the explosion.
Ren watched her, quiet for a moment.
Then he said, “Shiohama started like this.”
Layla didn’t look up.
“I believe you.”
“No,” he said. “You don’t understand.”
He stood, walked to her, and held out his hand.
She hesitated, then gave him the phone.
He scrubbed the video backward.
Paused.
There.
One frame before the eruption.
He tapped it.
Layla leaned in.
The plaza’s paving stones shimmered with water. But it wasn’t chaotic—it wasn’t random.
The water had formed a shape.
Curled. Deliberate.
A spiral.
Layla blinked.
“No…”
“It wasn’t an accident,” Ren said. “It’s how it speaks.”
She took the phone back, heart hammering now.
“It’s not just pressure. It’s pattern.”
Ren nodded.
Layla slowly lowered the phone and looked at him.
“You think… it’s alive.”
“I think it remembers.”
They stood together for a long, quiet moment. The sound of gulls and cars floated up faintly from the streets below.
Finally, Layla spoke.
“If this is real… if it’s global…”
“It is.”
“Then we can’t keep this to ourselves.”
Ren didn’t answer. He just looked at her.
She looked back.
Something passed between them—something heavier than proof or data or doubt.
“I’m posting it,” she said. “Everything. The footage. The map overlay. My notes.”
Ren’s face was unreadable.
Layla continued, “They’ll call me a hoaxer. Or paranoid. Or worse. But if even one person listens…”
He nodded once. “Do it.”
She turned, sat on the ledge, and started uploading.
It would take hours to spread.
Maybe longer to be believed.
But the water didn’t care about belief.
The spiral had spoken.
And now… someone had answered.                  

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    Hy everybody

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    جميل❤

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