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Chapter 11: The Village Elder

As they made their way back through the village, the sun hung low in the sky, casting long shadows on the path. The air was filled with the aroma of dinner wafting from nearby homes, the sound of laughter and chatter echoing in the warm evening. It was a stark contrast to the heavy emotions they had just encountered by the river, and Sarah felt a sense of normalcy wash over her.
“Do you think the elder will know more stories?” Aina asked, her voice full of curiosity.
“I hope so,” Amir replied, glancing at Sarah. “The elder is a well of wisdom. He’s seen so much in his lifetime; he might have insights into spirits we haven’t even considered.”
As they approached the elder’s home, a modest wooden structure adorned with colorful decorations, they felt a mix of excitement and reverence. The village elder, Pak Hassan, was known for his deep knowledge of local lore and his ability to commune with spirits.
They knocked gently on the door, and after a moment, it creaked open to reveal Pak Hassan, a man in his late seventies, with a long white beard and kind, weathered eyes that sparkled with a lifetime of stories.
“Ah, welcome! Come in, come in!” he beckoned them inside, his voice warm and inviting.
The interior of the home was filled with an array of artifacts—woven baskets, intricate carvings, and shelves lined with books. The air smelled of herbs and incense, creating an atmosphere that felt both comforting and mystical.
“Please, sit,” Pak Hassan offered, motioning to a low table surrounded by cushions. “What brings you here this evening?”
Sarah exchanged a glance with Amir before speaking. “We’ve been learning about the spirits of this land. We helped the hantu kopek by the river today, and we want to know if there are others who might need assistance.”
Pak Hassan’s eyes widened with interest, a smile creeping across his face. “You helped the hantu kopek? That is no small feat! Few have the courage to face such sorrow.” He leaned closer, his voice lowering to a conspiratorial whisper. “Tell me, how did you manage to bring her peace?”
With enthusiasm, Aina recounted the tale of their encounter, her words flowing freely as she described the beautiful spirit, her sorrow, and how they had encouraged her to let go of her grief. Pak Hassan listened intently, nodding with approval.
“Very well done, young one,” he said, turning his gaze to Aina. “Your compassion is a gift.”
Sarah felt a warmth blossom in her heart at Pak Hassan’s praise for Aina. “We want to help more spirits, if we can. Do you know of any others who might be in need?”
The elder’s expression grew thoughtful, his fingers stroking his beard as he contemplated their request. “There are many stories woven into the fabric of this land, but one stands out—a tale of a spirit known as the penanggalan. She was once a beautiful woman, but her vanity led to her downfall. Now she roams the night, seeking redemption for her past.”
“The penanggalan?” Amir echoed, shivers running down his spine. “Isn’t she the one with her head detached from her body, flying through the air?”
“Yes,” Pak Hassan replied solemnly. “Her spirit is tormented, and she seeks to reclaim her humanity. She is often misunderstood and feared, but her story is one of tragedy, not malice. If you wish to help her, you must be prepared for the darkness she carries.”
Sarah felt a chill creep over her. “How can we find her?”
“The penanggalan is known to frequent places where the wounded gather—hospitals, the homes of the sick. It is said that her presence can be felt in the stillness of the night,” Pak Hassan explained, his gaze steady. “If you are brave enough to seek her, remember that you must approach with kindness. She has suffered greatly, and it is love that will guide her home.”
Aina’s eyes sparkled with determination. “We can do it! We can help her too!”
Sarah’s heart swelled with pride at her daughter’s bravery, but a sense of foreboding tugged at her. The penanggalan was a much darker spirit than the hantu kopek. They would need to tread carefully.
“We’ll find her,” Amir said, his voice firm. “If we can help her find redemption, we must try.”
“Very well,” Pak Hassan said, his eyes glimmering with wisdom. “But remember, the night can be treacherous. Prepare yourselves and seek her when the moon is high. You will need all the strength you can muster.”
After gathering what little information Pak Hassan could share about the penanggalan, they thanked him and prepared to leave. As they stepped outside, the sun had fully set, and the night wrapped around them like a cloak.
“What do you think?” Amir asked as they walked back home. “Are we ready for this?”
“I think we have to be,” Sarah replied, her voice steady but her heart racing. “We’ve faced darkness before, and we can face it again. But we must remember to stay together and support each other.”
As they reached their home, Aina looked up at her parents, her small face filled with determination. “We’re a family, and we can do anything together!”
Sarah knelt down, wrapping her arms around Aina. “You’re right, sweetheart. We can. And that’s what makes us strong.”
That night, as they prepared for their journey into the unknown, Sarah couldn’t shake the feeling of apprehension that lingered in the air. The penanggalan was a spirit of sorrow and darkness, and they would need to approach her with both bravery and compassion.
But as they laid in bed, Sarah felt comforted by the presence of her family. Whatever lay ahead, they would face it together, united by love and the desire to help those still lost in the shadows.
The following evening, the moon hung high in the sky, casting a silvery glow over the landscape. Armed with lanterns, a few offerings of flowers, and the journal filled with their notes, they set out toward the nearby village hospital, where the penanggalan was said to roam.
As they walked through the dimly lit streets, shadows danced along the walls, creating an eerie ambiance that sent chills down Sarah’s spine. She glanced at Amir and Aina, their faces illuminated by the soft glow of the lanterns. Aina’s eyes were wide with wonder, while Amir’s expression was focused and determined.
“Stay close,” Amir instructed, his voice low. “The night can play tricks on your mind.”
Sarah nodded, feeling the weight of the unknown settle over them. As they approached the hospital, an unsettling stillness enveloped the air, amplifying the sound of their footsteps on the gravel path.
The building loomed ahead, its windows darkened, but they could hear faint whispers echoing from within. “It feels strange here,” Aina said, her small voice barely above a whisper.
“It’s just the hospital,” Amir reassured her. “Many people come here in need of help. We’re here to listen, just like we did with the hantu kopek.”
Taking a deep breath, Sarah pushed the heavy door open, and they stepped inside. The air was thick with antiseptic, but there was a deeper sorrow that lingered, a sense of loss and grief that clung to the walls.
As they moved through the empty halls, the flickering fluorescent lights cast an otherworldly glow, and Sarah felt an uncomfortable chill wash over her. “Where do we start?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper.
“Let’s go to the ward,” Amir suggested. “That’s where most people come for help.”
They made their way down the corridor, their lanterns casting long shadows in the corners. The silence was palpable, and the distant sound of a clock ticking echoed through the air, marking the passage of time.
Suddenly, a low, mournful wail echoed through the hallway, causing Aina to gasp and cling tightly to Sarah’s hand. The sound was haunting, filled with pain and longing.
“Did you hear that?” Aina whispered, her eyes wide.
“Stay close,” Amir instructed, his voice steady but laced with urgency.
They continued toward the ward, the sound growing louder with each step. As they entered the room, they were met with a sight that took their breath away—a figure hovering near a bed, her hair cascading like a dark waterfall, her face a mask of sorrow.
It was the penanggalan.
The spirit’s eyes glimmered with a mix of sadness and anger as she sensed their presence. “Why have you come here?” she hissed, her voice filled with a haunting melody that echoed in the room.
“We’ve come to help you,” Sarah replied, her heart racing but her voice unwavering. “We want to listen to your story and help you find peace.”
The penanggalan let out a sharp, bitter laugh that sent chills down their spines. “Peace? How can I find peace when I am forever cursed to wander this earth in torment?”
Amir stepped forward, his voice firm yet compassionate. “You are not alone. You don’t have to carry this burden by yourself. We want to help you remember who you were before this curse.”
The spirit glared at them, her eyes flashing with anger and despair. “You think you can understand my suffering? I was beautiful once, admired by all! My vanity led to my downfall. Now I am trapped in this form, searching for a way to reclaim my humanity.”
Sarah felt a deep sense of empathy for the penanggalan. “Your beauty was not just in your appearance; it was in your heart. You can reclaim that. You just have to let go of your sorrow and regret.”
As the spirit hovered before them, a flicker of doubt crossed her face. “Let go? How can I let go of the pain that has become my identity?”
Aina, feeling brave, spoke up. “You can start by forgiving yourself. You made mistakes, but you can learn from them. You can still find joy, even in the darkness.”
For a moment, the penanggalan seemed to waver, her form flickering as if the weight of her sorrow was lifting. “But what if I am unworthy of forgiveness?”
“You are worthy,” Amir insisted, his voice steady. “We all make mistakes. What matters is what we do after. You can choose to embrace love and compassion. You can find your way back to the light.”
The spirit’s expression softened as she looked at them, a mix of vulnerability and pain in her eyes. “Can you truly help me?”
“Yes,” Sarah affirmed, stepping forward with courage. “We believe in you. Let us show you that redemption is possible.”
As they reached out their hands, the penanggalan hesitated, but the warmth of their kindness enveloped her. The room filled with a soft glow as the spirit began to transform, the shadows of her sorrow lifting like fog in the morning sun.
“I want to believe,” she whispered, her voice trembling.
With one final breath, the penanggalan released the weight of her despair, and a radiant light enveloped her, illuminating the room with warmth and hope.
“I forgive myself,” she said, her voice now a gentle whisper. “I want to be free.”
In that moment, the air around them shimmered, and the spirit’s form began to dissolve into sparkling light, leaving behind a sense of peace that washed over the ward. The sadness that had clung to the hospital seemed to lift, replaced by a sense of serenity.
As they stood together, Sarah felt a rush of relief and joy. They had done it again—helped another lost soul find her way home. “We did it!” Aina cheered, her eyes bright with excitement.
Amir pulled Aina into a warm embrace, and Sarah couldn’t help but smile, her heart swelling with pride for her family. “Together, we can face anything,” she said, feeling the bond between them grow stronger with every spirit they helped.
As they left the hospital, the moon hung high above, its light guiding their path home. They were not just a family; they were a force of love and compassion, lighting the way for those still lost in the darkness.
With each spirit they encountered, they learned more about themselves and the power of love. There were more stories to uncover, more spirits to help, and they were ready for whatever lay ahead, united in their mission to bring peace to the restless souls of their land.

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    deviDurga

    Nice

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    HadiJunaidi

    so good

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    good story

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